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« Reply #30 on: June 29, 2014, 01:57:20 am »
Wednesday, September 15th, 2410

Luckily, the synthetic rock didn't cause any serious damage. I'm out of the hospital today, and I'll be back in school tomorrow. Man, this school year sure has a track record of hospitalizations. First Ricky's coma, then Maxton split his foot open, now it's my turn... jeeze!

Oh, June dropped in. Like, she literally fell from a tree. She's fine, though. You see, June has a really weird power called Shadow Shifting. I found out she can turn herself into a shadow and move quickly through them. I guess she saw me at school last week. How embarrassing...
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Re: Unforgivable
« Reply #31 on: June 29, 2014, 02:18:14 pm »
[Crap, I accidentally deleted #21!]
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Re: Unforgivable
« Reply #32 on: June 29, 2014, 04:59:59 pm »
[Alright re-wrote it, moving on]
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Unforgivable #30
« Reply #33 on: June 29, 2014, 07:21:11 pm »
Thursday, September 16th, 2410

I didn't find June in our usual spot at lunch today, so I went out looking for her. I eventually found her, behind the main building talking with Ebony and Delsin. I didn't catch what they said, but June seemed to be really distressed. She's a bit shorter than the two, Delsin especially. I don't remember exactly what happened after that, but I woke up a few minutes later with a headache. They were gone, and I had to get to science class. I couldn't find June anywhere. I'm worried about her.
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Unforgivable #31
« Reply #34 on: June 29, 2014, 08:15:03 pm »
Friday, September 17th, 2410

...Where do I start?

Like, seriously, what just happened? I can't seem to think straight at all! I'm going to have to make a summary tomorrow. I just... can't process this just yet. Give me a day.
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« Reply #35 on: June 29, 2014, 10:40:12 pm »
Saturday, September 18th, 2410

Sorry about that. After yesterday my mind's been really scrambled. Now I think I'll be able to fill you in, though.

I talked to June in private today. We talked about how she knows Ebony and Delsin... For personal reasons, I don't want to write down what I heard in this journal. I think you'll understand.

After school, she dropped by my house. We went over the book another time. It just occurred to me- perhaps the alchemy instructions called for a power like hers. Could that really be the answer we've been looking for?

We tested it- over the book... She turned her hand into a jet-black shadow, and I turned my hand to pure light. Our hands seemed to attract one another... We could both feel an immense amount of power on the edge of release. We touched hands. Our fingers interlocked... Sparks of light and black violently burst from the point of contact, but the book started to glow. The sparking intensified until it finally exploded- June and I were blasted in opposite directions, and the book lit aflame. When I came to, everything was a blur... I heard garbled whispering, but I don't think it was in English. The book had lit my desk on fire, but I saved my journal. As I was scrambling to put out the fire, I heard voices. Frantic yelling, something about fire. I think that was just me hearing the people outside, but it sounded like it was in my head. That explosion must have really busted me up.

After the fire was out, I was alone with June again. I must have thrown a tantrum. The book was destroyed, and the experiment was a failure... I remember June crying... Oh god, did I yell at her? I didn't mean to. I was confused and frustrated.

June... I'm sorry... Will you forgive me?
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Unforgivable #33
« Reply #36 on: July 01, 2014, 05:16:07 pm »
Sunday, September 19th, 2410

I've thought it over the last couple of days. When we touched light and darkness, the book lit on fire due to the sparks that flew out. As it turns out, the book was just a bunch of nonsense.

I mean, what did I think would happen? The spirit would just walk over to our world and everything would be all dandy? Today, I learned life doesn't work like that. There is no spirit world... and there is no way to prove there is a parallel universe. What a waste... I feel really stupid now.

I have to apologize to June tomorrow. I've been an idiot.
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Unforgivable #34
« Reply #37 on: July 02, 2014, 05:14:43 pm »
Monday, September 20th, 2410

I talked to June today at lunch. She was quiet... but she was real comforting. She told me it wasn't my fault that I lost my cool. I KNOW that's not true. She's just trying to make me feel better... It kind of worked. Still, though, I'm a bit disappointed.

Well, anyway, it's time to get ready for the big final... the tournament.
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Unforgivable #35
« Reply #38 on: July 13, 2014, 06:22:33 pm »
Tuesday, September 21st, 2410

Yeah, so maybe there isn't really a parallel dimension... I'm still going to use this journal. It really helps me gather my thoughts.
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Unforgivable #36
« Reply #39 on: July 13, 2014, 06:26:25 pm »
Wednesday, September 22nd, 2410

I'm thinking of asking June out for lunch on Friday. It's going to be a date... sort of.

Something about Ebony really bugs me, though. Even more so, Delsin... I didn't realize it until today- Delsin's eyes are red. His hair's white, and his skin's pale. I think he's albino- maybe that's why he wears that hood.
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Unforgivable #37
« Reply #40 on: July 16, 2014, 06:12:39 pm »
Thursday, September 23rd, 2410

Ricky and Maxton have noticeably teamed up. You see, when you keep a bunch of wildly different yet ridiculously powerful kids under the same roof, they form factions. There's Maxton's gang, who's always causing trouble. I've seen a whole group of element-powered jocks who all happen to all be on the sparring team. (Yes, competitive fighting. This school never ceases to amaze me...) J's group is full of all sorts of weirdos, myself included. We have a celebrity, a cheerleader, a really cute bookworm...

Heh. I'm thinking of her again. I hope I have the courage to ask tomorrow.
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Unforgivable #38
« Reply #41 on: July 17, 2014, 12:47:10 am »
Friday, September 24th, 2410

I asked June out, and she said yes! It doesn't take much imagination to figure out just how excited I am right now. I won't really freak you out with all the crazy screaming, you're welcome for that. It's weird, though. It was at the end of lunch period when I asked her, and no one else was in the hallway, but I could have sworn someone was watching us. Freaky. Anyway, our date's set for tomorrow night at Val's. That's right, 20th century style food. Hey, the restaurant choice was her idea, but I'm having no objections. I love sandwiches!
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Unforgivable #39
« Reply #42 on: July 20, 2014, 07:08:40 pm »
Sunday, September 26th, 2410

I'd say that date went pretty well. Hate to be the bringer of gossip, but I've learned a lot about her. June's mother went missing when she was a baby, and her father passed on a few years later. She's been living with her Uncle and cousin. Oh, and yes, Ebony is her cousin. I wasn't entirely surprised, considering their similar powers... Hopefully, now that I'm June's "boyfriend", Ebony won't be so bitter, right?

Ugh... I have a feeling this won't be so simple. I should stay positive. More importantly, I should be training. The course final's just in a matter of days, and I have to live up to J's standards!
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Unforgivable #40 and #41
« Reply #43 on: July 22, 2014, 07:40:18 pm »
Page 40/41 is mostly gone. The uneven fringe suggests it was angrily ripped out.
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Unforgivable #42 (Censored)
« Reply #44 on: July 22, 2014, 08:58:53 pm »
The handwriting is Ark's, but is noticeably jagged and sloppily written.

Thursday, September 30th, 2410

UGH! I can't stand that ███hole! I swear, tomorrow, I'm going to beat the living ████ out of him! Excuse me, let me slow down...

If it isn't really clear, I haven't written any entries this week. That's because my journal- THIS journal was stolen. It was after lunch just this Monday when I lost it. It was pretty awkward, seeing as no one in this school even knew I had a journal. I couldn't ask anyone else to help because, you know... this book's real personal. You can only imagine how angry I was when I heard, and I quote, "Maxton Neverith has your little diary". After school just today I was cornered by Maxton's gang. He tossed me the book and they all just started teasing me. I don't really want to write down what I heard... I tried to punch Maxton in the face, but he pushed me down. The rest of the gang just left with him, but Ricky stayed for a few seconds. I was sitting on the ground, clutching the book close to my chest. I must have looked completely pathetic. He read all through my journal, same as everyone else, but I guess he thought he'd make things even more painful for me. Ricky told me that June, when she was eleven, lost her virginity to... Ugh, forget it! He was just trying to kick me while I was down. Ricky was lying!

Anyway, someone wrote some really nasty stuff on page 40, so I ripped it out. My heart's still racing. I'm still really ticked off right now. Tomorrow, at the tournament, I'm going to make Maxton regret this.
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